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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-02-05 09:19 PM



Hey Guys and Girls Have Some Fun

Beach, Sand, Sun.
Six foot waves.
Surfer girls.
Fun, fun, fun.
Take a tan,
take a tan,
take a tan.
Be all that
you can.
Don't fear,
nor hesitate,
this life is
yours to take.
See those girls
with the dark
olive tans.
They could be
your biggest fans.
Keep in mind
that they're
surfer girls,
not nuns.
Take a tan,
ride a wave,
catch some girls,
have some fun.

JamesLee
05February
2007
Its 80 degrees
in Hawaii today.





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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2007-02-05 09:47 PM


It was five degrees here when I woke up this morning.  Hawaii sounds so inviting at the moment!  Fun write James.
The Lady
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The Southwest
2 posted 2007-02-05 09:51 PM



ohhhh hot!

nice James


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2007-02-05 10:11 PM


Oh wow!!
It's sub zero up here in Canada!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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4 posted 2007-02-05 11:50 PM


If the tickets were free, I would be there in about 1/2 an hour I miss Hawaii, and my Princess Kaiulani.  I think I am about due. What a fun write James Michael.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2007-02-06 12:19 PM


That's a whole different world from the one I'm living in! Sounds like there's lots of fun in the sun! I'll pass on the girls ~ but a surfer guy would do me just fine! With all this ice and snow around here, I need some warmin' up!

Enjoyed the read!

Signed
Envious One

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
6 posted 2007-02-06 12:40 PM


Hey James we are having heatwaves , its almost 100 degrees here

Hope

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2007-02-06 09:33 AM


Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

8 posted 2007-02-06 02:58 PM


thats it, I've had it with this freezin cold weather, I'm comin to Hawaii....

hehe

Nice write James

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
9 posted 2007-02-06 03:14 PM


Ok, ok....now I'm ready for a trip to the ocean....but I want to see some of those surfer boys....lol....with the nice tans!  
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