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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2007-01-08 07:55 PM




                  my flower has the sweetest smile

                         and like a Dell technician

i can daydream for hours wondering how to delete the file

that says i can't complete the miles to her heart no matter how much power

                           my words may emanate

i can't devour my need to anticipate

the day we can part

                                     as friends



                                                                             love,

                                                                            howard


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Mercury06
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since 2006-12-28
Posts 9
Australia, QLD
1 posted 2007-01-09 12:10 PM


Hello Howard,
You have such an extraordinary way with words.  I have been reading your posts lately, and have been equally touched by all of them.  This is a sweet sentiment that portrays love in a modern way. Very nice.
~Mercury

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-01-09 03:30 AM


Howard... enjoyed this write of yours  
RDB

howardtsu
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3 posted 2007-01-09 11:39 AM


thanks mercury06, your comment means a lot to me

thanks roniece

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