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Just can't stay
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Just can't stay |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
She was young, at 28. Died in a crash, no one had expected. She clung to life at first hour. Whispers of hopes into her ears, cheering her on to stay, just one more day, From all her friends. She teared, mingled with her red. Seemed to say, I would, but i can't. It's too hurtful, I'm in dire state. She didn't winked, her heart surrendering, inners shuting. Say "Goodbyes", "Goodbyes" drowned by pounding hands, of anguish and hate, You can't leave like that... I'm sorry mum, I'm in real pain, let me go, I don't want to stay.... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FNG~ So sad ... so very, very sad~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
FNG...Understanding this... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
WOW... it took me back, to when I lost a friend at 25. She knew it was her time, she said her goodbyes to those she loved including me... and in a car crash she got her wings. So sad, every day I miss her... but I know she is in a better place, watching over us.. Very touching... Thanks for sharing. Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Thank you all so much for sharing and understanding my grieve for this lady..... FNG |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Thank you all here who share and understand my grieve...  cheers to Life! while we still can, with our love ones......FNG |
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