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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2007-01-31 10:39 AM

you are all seasons
summer spring winter or fall
my raison d'être

Inspired by: /main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=96&topic=002841

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-01-31 11:00 AM

I do love when you get inspired!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2007-01-31 11:08 AM

Interloper
Inspiring

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2007-01-31 11:10 AM

Beautiful indeed!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2007-01-31 11:47 AM

very nice

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2007-01-31 12:20 PM

Hmmmm

Interloper, rising.

Well done!

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2007-01-31 05:21 PM

Interloper darling man, You did it again this is special indeed.

Truly worth coming in for

My raison d'être
My reason for drawing breath
A reason to live

Wonderful you are
A writer without compare
Such poetic skill
I have just finished doing Haiku, or as I renamed it hate-ku in my Uni. course, there is something less than lovely about Basho
On a bare branch
A rook roosts
Autumn dusk
(source Basho, in Bownas and Thwaite, 1964, p111, lines 1 and 2)
the translation from Japanese just doesn’t do anything for me at all, how I wish I could have had something like your writing to work on, then maybe I would have enjoyed it so much more. I would have loved having your work to get my teeth into.

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x x x x x

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2007-01-31 06:03 PM

Thank you all ... and just a reminder ...
I write mostly in American Senryu

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2007-01-31 11:41 PM

beauty Doctor Love
sheer beauty...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2007-02-01 01:37 PM

you dear, make me blush
as pink as springtime blossoms
seasons' love poet

thankyou Interloper for being inspired by my simple words ~ hugs, Chris

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2007-02-01 02:17 PM

Within the cover
of a blanket made from love
is to find true warmth

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2007-02-01 02:26 PM

Chris ~
my lovely friend Chris
has never written simply
just beautifully

Martie ~
how I hate it so
when you write better than me
but it is the norm

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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