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Beatrice Boyle
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0 posted 2007-01-29 02:34 PM



Reliving days of yesteryear
Recalling days of pain
Summoning pictures of loved ones
Bringing them closer once again
Feeling the same foreboding
Walking that valley of fear
Trying to hold on
To those we loved so dear
Re-examining choices made
What if I'd done this?
Should I have taken the other road?
What signposts did I miss?
Was it karma or bad choices
That led to some regrets?

We cannot change what was
Nor ever bring back the past
But only savor the memory
Of a love that will always last.


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2007-01-29 03:58 PM


Beatrice Boyle
Every path has its roses and its thorns.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2007-01-29 04:18 PM


"We cannot change what was
Nor ever bring back the past
But only savor the memory
Of a love that will always last."

How very true Bea~And perfectly said.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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3 posted 2007-01-29 04:30 PM


Bea,

I am so sorry, I loved your poem but you know what a twisted sense of humour I have at times. I couldn't help thinking how it would alter the poem to SLIGHTLY alter the last two lines:

But only savor the memories
And hope they won't be our last!

Sorry Bea I love you really, now where can I hide.....

Ivor

Beatrice Boyle
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4 posted 2007-01-30 10:54 AM


Thanks Seymour...isn't it interesting that the thorns somehow enhance the rose's beauty!

Bea

Beatrice Boyle
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5 posted 2007-01-30 10:55 AM


Thanks enchantress...

Bea

Beatrice Boyle
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6 posted 2007-01-30 11:00 AM


Ivor...you know what they say in Hollywood..."I don't care what you call me...just spell my name correctly on the check!"

Bea

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