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The Lady
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0 posted 2007-01-08 11:45 AM




and you thought I had nothing
to hide behind
when you found me
but you didn’t see fingers coming

fingers covering my eyes
mouth
now nose

I have so many of them  
enough to hide
a lifetime of wanting  
enough to hide my soul

even as you lift one
another takes its place

move your fingers
you laugh
I cannot see your eyes
when love is with you

here
here
give me that finger

move your silly fingers  
or I will stow them  
one by one  
in my mouth  

look
give me that
oh

that finger tastes
pink

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-01-08 12:18 PM


mmmmmmmmm...wow
The Lady
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2 posted 2007-01-08 12:22 PM



thank you very much Dixie
I like wow


Interloper
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2007-01-08 01:13 PM


Like cotton candy?

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2007-01-08 02:17 PM


YES WOW!!!  I am so much enjoying this series!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2007-01-08 02:19 PM


Lady
Delicious fingers. Enjoyed

MoonShadow
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6 posted 2007-01-08 02:46 PM



Mmmmmmm Lady Fingers... my favorite.

          MoonShadow
.

The Lady
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7 posted 2007-01-08 03:32 PM


oh cotton candy!
‘Loper!
that’s so perfect  

thanks for your wow Nancy
I’m loving writing this series!
      

Sir Sy  
as always  
I love your comment
  thank you        


oh MoonShadow
how ummmmmm… delicious
thank you kindly sir

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2007-01-08 10:36 PM


Kate... just fabulous!!!  I love your Michael poems very much!!  RDB
The Lady
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9 posted 2007-01-08 10:40 PM




thank you so much Roniece


LeeJ
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10 posted 2007-01-09 04:25 AM


fancy free and fun loving write...enjoyed
Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2007-01-09 09:07 AM


Oh so pretty in pink Kate....   Love this!!
Earth Angel
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12 posted 2007-01-09 10:04 AM


Kate, you bring the voyeur out in me! I do so enjoy witnessing the intimate moments you so skillfully write about in your poems!


Linda

The Lady
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13 posted 2007-01-09 07:31 PM


thank you so much LeeJ
glad you enjoyed

pink has become my new favorite color gentle Donna
thank you
    

  
Linda Angel

thank you
    


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
14 posted 2007-01-09 10:16 PM


Congrats on 5,000 posts, Kate.

As for this poem?

I think your fingers
are removing veils.

Well done, Lady.


The Lady
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15 posted 2007-01-09 10:22 PM




Karilea!

removing veils!
how delightful is that?

thank you dear friend
for your words
and the congrats!


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