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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
the loneliness of silent solemnity sounds its softened voice so hushed by scars of fate until the breaking of the guard abounds as laughter-less liquors recede and then abate to drink us in, to drink us down in mem’ries so quickly gone in mem’ries so quietly done in mem’ries so bathed in lucid tones and hues that color us with broad brushstrokes of fear of that which we recall, of that which we re-call to shame our hearts to silent solemnity closing our hearts, scarring our souls by mem’ries moribund resonance sounding against the breakwater of our souls |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
that color us with broad brushstrokes of fear of that which we recall, of that which we re-call to shame our hearts to silent solemnity closing our hearts, scarring our souls by mem’ries moribund resonance sounding against the breakwater of our souls this had classic undertones to it...but I cannot pinpoint the author...outstanding write, hauntingly beautiful...bittersweet...and needs to go back up to the top for all to savor Indeed, a classic |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So very good to read you again. The weave is very intentional on this write, and the hum of the heart within it resounds long after the final line. Touched me.  |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
I love the alliteration in this. Hell, I love the whole thing an excellent read. Thanks for sharing. Library I think "Was I right |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
astounding piece! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Steven~ I found the allerations to be imaginatively placed~ What a pleasure to read~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Thank you LeeJ for the generous comments Appreciate your kind remarks, ThisDiamond…it has been awhile You are more than kind, Tris…, Trisk, aw, thank you 13aphobia passing, always appreciate your taking the time to read and comment Marge, what can I say but (humbly) thank you so very kindly |
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