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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-01-24 10:57 PM



Creation

God’s creations kill,
God’s creations make a world that’s ill.
God’s creations go to war,
I wonder what he made them for.

If my creations were the kind,
that brought despair to all mankind,
then I would surly be to blame,
would people hate, or love my name?

Some say the gift of our free will
is why we have the urge to kill.
But surly God created mind,
and set the mould for all Mankind.

Animals were born to feed
on living things to fill their need.
It’s not just man whom God has made,
that make death their living trade.

Maybe it’s just, I’ve got it wrong,
I should join others in their song,
in praising God for all that’s good,
while his Creations scream for blood.

Religions of the world unite,
and ask yourself if it is right,
that we should serve,, till death from birth
the creator of true hell on earth.

But maybe God is you and me,
and not a single entity.
A living power of minds combined,
if so…  let’s pray for all Mankind.

Ivor G Davies

The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2007-01-25 05:56 PM


"let’s pray for all Mankind."

Amen!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2007-01-25 07:28 PM


Ivor,
Let us pray together. and let us start together, for all ends well that starts well.

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
3 posted 2007-02-24 03:11 AM


JL, Sey,

probably need more than the three of us!

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