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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-07-12 10:15 AM

Before I fall any deeper
tell me this ain't no dream
that you are for real
and that your truly what you seem.

Your the one that knows
that my heart has been down this road before..

all I need is your love
and not one single thing more

than this man you appear to be
the one that say's he's fallen in love with me

but before I fall in too deep

   tell me please

                    this ain't no dream.

If the sun never rises
I want to go down in flames
I want the last thing I hear
is to be you whispering my name
hold me tight
and love me like
there's no tomorrow.  {T. Adkins}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-12-2007 11:15 AM).]

Robert Jordan
Member

since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

1 posted 2007-07-12 10:35 AM

Gentle Spirit,

WOW, there is a bunch of poets from Pennsylvania, the poetic state.

This is a good read, and I like the way it runs.

The only thing is, be careful of "your" and "you're".

You're" is the contraction for "you are", while "your" is a possessive.

Keep up the good work.

Bobby

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2007-07-12 11:15 AM

Thank you Robert Jordan. Yes, we have a few poets that frequent Pip from Pa.

No more hangin' on to the past
No more filling up my tomorrows
With yesterday's sorrows
No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt}

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-07-12 12:23 PM

darn lady, your making me teary eyed...(happy tears) don't question it, just enjoy it...and I'm wishing you many years to come of happiness...hugs to ya...love the new picture...fabulously beautiful!!!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-07-12 01:32 PM

beautiful and romantic.

enjoyed

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-07-12 04:54 PM

May your dream turn into a wonderful reality...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2007-07-12 08:07 PM

I know the feeling...it's hard to have faith when you've had so many nightmares

beautiful write

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2007-07-12 10:51 PM

gentle Donna
tell me the difference in dream and reality
when it comes to love

wish we could buy "he loves me for real" insurance

I love this

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

8 posted 2007-07-13 01:18 AM

So heartfelt, you can't help but feel it.
Lovely, just lovely.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2007-07-13 02:16 AM

Some say, "Let your conscious be your guide."

~ But regarding affairs of the heart, I believe that it is prudent to let your intuition guide you.

May your Mister McDreamy be not a dream ~ but a glorious reality!

Love to you,

Linda

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2007-07-13 10:16 AM

GS:
I agree with EA above.
Great write!!

JL

What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively.
~JL

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