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Open Poetry #40

Old Poem

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-01-22 08:28 PM

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Sing
sad songs
nightingale.
The evening's growing cold.

Flowers curl
within their beds
as clouds
obscure the moon.

What stars tonight
won't be as bright
as once
they were ago

when Spring was green
and full of dreams

so unaware
of snow.

.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-22 09:02 PM

ah John... beautiful words here RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2007-01-22 09:23 PM

Lovely as always John

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-01-23 07:03 AM

what a feeling this brings me

*sigh*

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2007-01-25 03:53 PM

This is beautiful, from beginning to end. I haven't felt much like writing the last few days, but this one is kick-starting me, I think. Thank you.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-01-25 05:53 PM

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2007-01-27 11:50 PM

nice write...very nice...excellent imagery

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