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kyler New Member
since 2007-06-21
Posts 9 |
I am hiding behind a mask Not ready to show the world who I truly am Or maybe I am just waiting for someone brave enough to take my mask off Tell me its ok I like you the way you are Now you just have to show the world who you really are The way I see you |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
Hmm... I liked this poem. It's short and it also left a point. I feel that if not everybody, then mostly everybody is hiding behind a mask or insecure about something. So very nice, although I felt that "Or maybe" should have stood by itself on the third line. It would have read better that way. |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
Ahh The Phantom of the Opera. How we all like to unmask each other... even without being asked. Eric |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
Indeed, I don't think we should ask to be unmasked. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Try it in a mirror first adagio |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
as long as you are comfortable in who you are, nothing else should matter take it off and be yourself  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I think at times, we all wear our own kind of mask... it's always a brave and courageous thing to take them off... enjoyed. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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