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Hoeya
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since 2007-01-22
Posts 6


0 posted 2007-01-22 04:19 AM


Uh, this is the first poem I've ever written.

I see you here
sitting not too far
smooth like velvet
your skin like snow in fire

Your lovely lips
so close
it seems like I
almost taste a kiss

and yet
two feet seem
a million miles
so near and so far

Walk that far
if I knew your love
but I feel
naught your desire

Not mine to live
nor to love
nor to give
my undying love

You are for someone else.



© Copyright 2007 Hoeya - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2007-01-22 10:22 AM


Hoeya~
Welcome to PiP ... we are a wonderful circle of poetic friends~
Enjoy your stay here~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2007-01-22 12:11 PM


welcome indeed

looking forward to reading more of you!

Hoeya
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since 2007-01-22
Posts 6

3 posted 2007-01-22 01:09 PM


Thank you. I look forward to more visits to here..
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2007-01-22 05:19 PM


Hoeya.... Welcome to our blue pages!!  I enjoyed your first post... well done and please do grace us with more of your work..

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2007-01-22 07:19 PM



It's a good beginning!  Welcome to Passions.

Please, check your email
for a very special greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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