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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2007-06-22 09:11 AM


Repost:


The Magic Dew

I spent the morning collecting dew
A little for me a little for you
The mist of the morning’s magic bree
Just enough for some raspberry tea

Than I will horse my Randy and fly
Across the blue of a silver sky
Into a secret greenery glen
And woo her with my magic pen

A moth turned butterfly waits for me
And God she loves this raspberry tea
We sweeten it with nectar of flowers
It’s just the thing for romantic hours

We walk on a beach of timeless shore
Make inroads into evermore
And ride the tides in shameless abide
On the wiles of our passions tide

And though she is a phantom seem
I would no other wile or dream


© Copyright 2007 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-06-22 09:44 AM


YOU and your writing are
The mist of morning dew....
that leaves a lovely thought in the minds of all who read....

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-06-22 09:48 AM


Good morning, T-Man!

Oh, yes! I recall this beauty! I doubt that anyone could read it without a smile on their face ~ and in their

You have more sides to you, Poet Man, than Eve has Faces. I must admit, that I am most partial to this aspect! ~ But then, I'm an incurable romantic such as yourself ~ and I'm into the ethereal.

Sweet dreams!

EA

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2007-06-22 10:10 AM


oh that darlin Randy dragon ...
oh that raspberry dew
oh that magic pen of yours ...
oh how I adore the rhymes of you

what turns a moth to butterfly?
a winkie from me sweet Sy-guy.



        
*winkie winkie*

SEA
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4 posted 2007-06-22 10:39 AM


LOOK! You made Janet come back!!

hi Janet!

love this one...


paullallady
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5 posted 2007-06-22 11:16 AM


how brilliantly these tender words flow, amazing.
SmartChick
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6 posted 2007-06-22 11:45 AM


Sy, I am so glad you reposted this one. I don't remember reading it. This is so beautiful.
Martie
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7 posted 2007-06-22 12:45 PM


Sy...me thinks you have some butterfly in you, as well!  
Drauntz
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8 posted 2007-06-22 04:28 PM


very beautiful. a poem of fantasy. made me smile.

always good.

have a wonderful day, sir Tabin.

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2007-06-23 03:00 PM


LeeJ
Thank you sweetie.

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2007-06-23 03:03 PM


Earth Angel
"ethereal" that's where Randy and I fly.

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2007-06-23 03:16 PM


My Dearest Tink,
You are my chaos of the bubbling stream
You are the moss of my nightly dream
You are the candy of my Randy's pursue
You are the light that lights up the blue.


Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2007-06-23 03:17 PM


SEA
Thank you my dear.

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2007-06-23 03:18 PM


paullallady
A delightful comment.

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2007-06-23 03:19 PM


SmartChick
You are a doll. ;squeeze:

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2007-06-23 03:21 PM


Martie
I'd need some to keep up with you.

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2007-06-23 03:22 PM


Drauntz
You are always so kind.

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