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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Each moment Each moment time has past me by Each word I write is cast in fly The quickness of the up hill run Is fun until the downs begun? Beyond belief the fast of race There is no cast to slow the pace The process of the wear and tear Is eminent each flare of bare And time collects its toll of drain And lace by lace undoes the skein Until it bares the core of bare Shows every wrinkle every care Options turn a darker blue The wishing well has lost its spew And contemplation my dear horse Can no longer ride the course He bows his spoof on shaky legs And pours his hoof in dusty dregs |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SeymourLove~  Each moment that you poetically share is evidence, to me, that you truly care for friends in wait, who anticipate the morn of your words in soft adorn~ You 'age' well, my friend~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a love. Thank you dear.    |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, T-Man! You may not be as fleet of foot as you once were, but there is the heart of a stallion still beating in your magnificent sonneteering self! As for your writing? ~ You continue to be absolutely brilliant! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel If you did not have wings already I would pin a pair on you myself. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I would be honoured, Sir Sigh!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So let the horse now walk by you and cast your eye upon the view of vast green meadows and so much more for every day is beauty restored. Have been reading you... and finally a day to say thanks  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine The thanks is mine dear lady. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (01-21-2007 12:40 PM).] |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
.................................... The quickness of the up hill run Is fun until the downs begun? .................................... In every picture, there is a certain spot that catches the eye and lets the imagination play, there is sweet irony and also reality in this: Worth peddling uphill for the free ride down? Climbing mountains seems hard on the way up, it's harder coming down though! I think the secret is to enjoy both the up and the down, I've certainly had a lot of both and both can either bring ecstasy or misery. Mind you there is one up and down that is usually fun (or is that for another forum?) I also love, and am intrigued by, a turn of phrase you use, which I originally picked up in another piece and thought it was to keep rhythm (Now I know it is the mind of the poet): fast of race, flare of bare, toll of drain, etc. Your poetry is a delight to read and carries simple reality in every line..... Ivor |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
I am only a mere seventeen From this poem I view what you have seen you might be old and turning grey But your flame still shines so far away Bravo to you on one of the most life bearing poems I have ever read  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy.... you continue to delight me with your wonderful words...  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivor, Your mind moves like quicksilver. You will do well. The_Nameless_One You flatter me but then I love flattery. Thank you my friend. RDB, And you continue to delight with your delightful replies. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you and your contemplation horse ride the course very well together you sit your saddle well Sir Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Well then all I need is a Favor. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you, Seymour for always sharing your beautiful poetry with me. It always seems to makes my day a little brighter. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick LOL I don't see how you're very bright as is. |
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