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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-01-20 05:58 PM


Insight

At 'insights' there is not much fun,
my three post there all looking glum.
I don't know if they're read at all
or on deaf ears my words do fall.

On every other forum here,
from out the woodwork folks appear.
But at the 'insights', nothing stirs
it seems a place where nought occurs.

This place I chose for my first post
to gain a welcome from my host.
I wrote about our Bush and Blair
a ditti placed to see who care.

Don't get me wrong I'm having fun,
and many friends I feel I've won.
A true insight I've found with you,
but 'insights' makes me feel quite blue.

Rename this place, to 'Just to Read'
where all can plant their lonely seed.
Knowing there is none 'in sight'
to challenge them to get it right.

Contentious me, well not for long
I too can hear the siren's song.
Maybe my poetry is dead
and only by the poet read....

Ivor G Davies

The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2007-01-20 07:02 PM


Ivor,
Sometimes I feel the same way. You write real well just keep writing, my friend.

The_Nameless_One
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since 2007-01-20
Posts 165
Missouri
2 posted 2007-01-20 07:07 PM


This really expressed what you are feeling very well. It made me feel the frustration you are going through. I think you are a great poet and I would like to read more of your work.
ivordavies
Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
3 posted 2007-01-22 06:40 PM


Seymour,

My hand writes, I read, don't always agree, but it's publish and be damned I'm afraid!


ivordavies
Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
4 posted 2007-01-22 06:44 PM


The_Nameless_One

If you would like to read more of my work look in INSIGHTS... nobody else does (first post-Bush and Blair)

Only Joking....

I see from your writing that you are in a transitional stage and wish you luck in all, including your writing....

Have Fun,

Ivor

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