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Self Recognition
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Self Recognition |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Self Recognition Balloons of self recognition Don’t burst of their own volition They heat in a fiction sublime And burst in the friction of time Most times they’re clear, a see through go Sometimes the color of rainbow They’re pushed by winds erotic breeze Up and down like dust in tease They think they have the right to choose By thoughts into a heavens muse Following human sage of mend Into salvation of an end But balloons self recognition Don’t burst of their own volition They heat in a fiction sublime And burst in the friction of time They are the putty of the rape The instant of a single shape |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always bring new light to things that I've never really thought of before hope your day is happy Sy |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Dear sir, this one gets deeply into my mind. a beautiful poem with profound meaning. it has a very strong tune. it can be read as humble, or self-wakening or a malicious but true comment on others. beautiful one and enjoyed as always. but somehow I felt quite disturbed and heavy. I need too a "Self Recognition"...I lack of the confidence of yours. have a wonderful day, sir Tabin. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"The I that I know does not know enough to know that it does not know enough." --James Hollis, from the preface of "Why Good People Do Bad Things"   ?But you sure nailed that thought, and I admire you for dotting all of your "I's".  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing shadows Well I try.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz You mean confidence in no confidence? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity,  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JL Thank you, thank you. |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: fun thoughts |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Uriah, Missed you my friend. |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
This is a poem any age group can appreciate. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gmcooper That is a keen observation, thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautiful Sir Sy |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You are such an inspiration. |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
Beautiful, just beautiful. |
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