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Open Poetry #40

Losing her Smile

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-01-07 02:09 PM

                             i'd love to make her giggle

but she wriggled from my grasp

                         in my attempts to wiggle her heart

i forgot how easy it is to clasp

onto her charm without first learning how to chart

                                             her Atlantic

                                                                                   love,

                                                                                   howard

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-07 04:49 PM

Howard... this is just lovely!! RDB

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

2 posted 2007-01-08 07:53 PM

thanks Roniece

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-01-09 05:26 PM

Enjoyed...James

Devious Intellectual
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 112

4 posted 2007-01-09 07:49 PM

wow this was nice, i love how in this forum alot of writers use simplicity and use it welll,

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