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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2007-01-19 12:45 PM


conflicting opinions
ignorant sincerity
why can't you be you
and just let me be me?

not sure what is real now
or what I'm supossed to do
as I fade into black
and out of the blue
unable to trust
so don't turn around
to look at me
the door shut behind her
why didn't you shut it for me?


don't bother even
to pretend that you care
don't worry about
what I'm doing here
just remember I'm no longer
your golden hair surprise
although still green I am wise
you never knew me
was never there
no longer in the dark
free from you at last
through these gates
you'll never pass




~~~kingsangel~~~

© Copyright 2007 Julie Ann Campbell - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-01-19 01:35 PM


Fly high and free, little birdie!

Loving Light,

EA

LeeJ
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2 posted 2007-01-19 01:45 PM




know exactly the sincerity in this...

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2007-01-19 03:39 PM


Write on

Angel4aKing
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4 posted 2007-01-19 03:56 PM


Thank you for your replies....mostly about letting go of negativity...to find where you stand ultimately.....take care, JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-01-20 05:56 AM


JulieAnn... well done Miss!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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6 posted 2007-01-20 07:56 AM


I like this one...I can relate
Angel4aKing
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7 posted 2007-01-20 02:28 PM


Thank you both....I keep reading it....there is something I don't like about it but can't put my finger on it...Take care....JA

~~~kingsangel~~~

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