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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2007-01-19 09:26 AM



what if you said no
should I continue or stop
what does your heart say
does it tell you to submit
do your eyes betray your lips

Inspired by:
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Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2007 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2007-01-19 09:36 AM


I only pretend
I'm not really hard to get
you know me better


~*~

and when you kiss me
my lips will proove me, liar
stop means give me more


~*~

look here, in my eyes
I live for your kiss, your touch
please don't ever stop



Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2007-01-19 09:39 AM


Thats some lovely inspiration you have there Interloper, and this is beautiful.  Hugs.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2007-01-19 09:45 AM


Read my lips..

y..e...s....  

Well done!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Nightshade
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just out of reach
4 posted 2007-01-19 10:10 AM


May I join my sister in giving you a ?
Beautiful !!
Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2007-01-19 10:47 AM


Look deep into my eyes and you will know the answer.

You're not called Doctor Love for nothing!

Love hug,
EA

SmartChick
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6 posted 2007-01-19 12:13 PM


Beautiful! I hope you recieve your answer.
LeeJ
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7 posted 2007-01-19 12:39 PM


savy fingertips say, search inside this book
find out the identity behind this quiet lake, and mold us into a timeless melody....
and if I should say no, well, you always knew how difficult it is for me to pretend...

lovely inspiration you've placed there...


Angel4aKing
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8 posted 2007-01-19 12:49 PM


And if a heart could speak things would always come across crystal clear. And even clearer if a heart could listen. Take Care, JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

catalinamoon
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9 posted 2007-01-19 04:16 PM


I like the way you put this. I read the inspiration for this also, and another impressive piece there. You 2 go well together.
Sandra

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10 posted 2007-01-19 06:35 PM




ah Doctor Love
you know all
and see all

truth is always in the eyes  
yes?

I love it!
thank you sir


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
11 posted 2007-01-19 08:29 PM



And I see you've inspired
yet another...

Marvelous!


JamesMichael
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12 posted 2007-01-19 10:39 PM


Enjoyed...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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13 posted 2007-01-20 05:13 AM


mmm...mmm.. very nice, and I'm a good kisser too!!   RDB
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