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Aerial Pedantry |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Aerial Pedantry Amalgam dreams, stretched out upon the clouds Into wandering mists that veil the whispers of certainty On barefoot procession, each step dips my toes into starlight Hills and cleavage adorned by the moonlight, scented in mystery Intimate, the secrets of subconscious walks on crystal bridges Guiding your hands to soothe the tightest of lightning white strikes Ceasing the impetuous searching of sand, made into glass Innocence exalts the wind, as it sweeps away crumbs as snowflakes In your human hands, divined by right, to sweep the dew beads adorn And know me, in silver sled of found, left warm upon my waking heart Copyright Kkh 01/06/07 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"In your human hands, divined by right, to sweep the dew beads adorn And know me, in silver sled of found, left warm upon my waking heart" Oh so very beautiful Kathleen!  In the midst of winter, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes beautiful |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Pure poetry! Wow! Love, Margherita  |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Diamond your poetry that I have read so far sparkles..Très bien fait l'a aimé ! ! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
On barefoot procession, each step dips my toes into starlight Hills and cleavage adorned by the moonlight, scented in mystery What mystical visions your words awaken. love this! hugs, Chris |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Just beautiful, Kathleen! |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
On barefoot procession, each step dips my toes into starlight Hills and cleavage adorned by the moonlight, scented in mystery Siyo ThisDiamond what a beautiful vision this inspire of moonlit mountian glen,a small sparkling waterfall and sweet tedneness share with one who understands your very soul!
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
TD my favorite lines are taken and still your poem sings beautifully... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I always know when I open your poetry that it will be beautiful!! Thank you for sharing it with us, Kathleen. hugs, Ethel |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my !!! how wonderful! RDB |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
"...each step dips my toes into starlight." Gorgeous. The imagery in this poem is really interesting and the language is just lovely. Really lovely. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From beginning to end a tinsel thread of delight. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Delightful Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Amalgam dreams, stretched out upon the clouds Into wandering mists that veil the whispers of certainty" Too picturesque for words. A beauty. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh,yes, beautiful write - sets the mind to dreaming. |
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