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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest

0 posted 2007-01-19 02:22 AM



you are my sutra
sacred string
that holds my life together

when I am lost
in fog
confused
cobwebs dangle from the corner
of my life
I pull on you
my sutra

you feel my tug
hands touch
winding sacred string over fists
between fingers
lacing hands together
over and under pain
holding two like souls
in warm palms
giving them voice

then eye to dark eyed miracle    
you tell me  
all is as it should be  
don’t think    
...feel    
tie a slipknot  
here  

and feel


© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-01-19 04:24 AM


then eye to dark eyed miracle    
you tell me  
all is as it should be  
don’t think    
...feel    
tie a slipknot  
here  

and feel

Lady Kate, another one of your beautiful Michael poems... we are truly honoured - don't let them end too soon!!     RDB

MoonShadow
Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
2 posted 2007-01-19 07:09 AM



  Breathtaking and says all.

            MoonShadow
.

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2007-01-19 07:31 AM



You've exceeded the cradle...
as I sensed you would.

Absolutely fabulous!




Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2007-01-19 07:50 AM


you've out done yourself sweetie. Lovely.  
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2007-01-19 08:54 AM


Lady Kate, you never dish out a poetic meal that is less than deliciosa!

Big hug,
'L A'

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2007-01-19 09:10 AM


...

Speechless.

beyond incredible.

Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
7 posted 2007-01-19 09:22 AM


BRAVA!

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
8 posted 2007-01-19 07:43 PM




Roniece  
thank you
my friend

thank you so much  
Sir MoonShadow

Karilea
once again
thank you
for everything…

thank you gentle Donna!

thank you Angel Linda  
you make me hungry

big hug to you

Nancy
thank you for speechless

Doctor Love
awww… thank you

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