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Open Poetry #40

Breaking her Fall

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-05-21 01:15 PM

              the legend of our stable

is something of a fable

it's no myth that i put food on her table

after she told me that some other dude

was more than willing to keep her happy

                so slap me gently

but if you rode in her Bentley

you'd be tapping me on the shoulder

to squeeze and hold her Charmain

                      yourself

                                                                         love,

                                                                         howard

CHARLAX
Junior Member

since 2007-05-21

Posts 17
AZ,USA

1 posted 2007-05-21 02:14 PM

im a newby making my first reply
this poem is creative
eye like the stYle
you dont have to use capital letters
or spellcheck to bee a poet

[This message has been edited by Ron (05-23-2007 12:48 PM).]

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

2 posted 2007-05-22 11:52 AM

thanks charlax

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