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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-05-20 10:11 PM


Sensually She

"The lady wanted Jade so I searched the Orient
for a special piece that would win her heart,
for I wanted nothing on this Earth to keep her
apart from the desires of my heart."

I remember the first and second time
that she took the time to kiss me.
We were in a dance club in Waikiki
and the music was so intense that when
we talked she would pull in close to me.
She possessed the desire to say
the very sweet words I wished to hear
and each time she leaned close to talk
to me I would nibble upon her ear.
And then it happened, while they were
playing my favorite song, she offered
me her first and second kiss
as the music played along.

JamessLee
21May
2007





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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-20 11:21 PM


again, what a love poem...beautiful.
quite enjoyable scene. how nice to be young!!!

enjoyed.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-05-22 05:25 PM


Thank you Drauntz for the nice response...
I'm not young, so to speak;  young in heart but not young in age.  Romance and kisses are for all ages...James

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