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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I See I saw the bane of stigmas day Enigma of the white of light Those echoes bouncing pantomime Then the rain washed that away I saw the red beneath the clay The rot and root the bed of store The drain of prime and given time Then the rain washed that away I also looked on dogmas play Eat the heart with drips of lime That brings the quip of silent sound Then the rain washed that away I’ve seen the acid of the spray Laying clean the falling sands Where once again the trumpet calls Then the rain washed that away But somewhere in a future day Even chaos will wash away |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I saw the bane of stigmas day Enigma of the white of light Those echoes bouncing pantomime Then the rain washed that away  enjoyed this and you fantastic write Morning, coffee? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aha! Stretching your poetic wings a bit this fine winter's day! a b c a You "see" more than most!   EA |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Im always amazed at your vocabulary. I might be able to learn a new word every time you post a poem..dogmas? <--had to look it up. Thanks for posting quality poetry me and my coffee thank you. Well done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I’ve seen the acid of the spray Laying clean the falling sands Where once again the trumpet calls Then the rain washed that away But somewhere in a future day Even chaos will wash away" Wonderful pearls of wisdom today Sy! My tea and I thank you!   & , NancyIn the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ May you never wash away.  Earth Angel, Too little or too much never seems to suit me. trutodaraiders, We learn new things every day. Thanks for the read and reply. Nancy, Have a wonderful day dear. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful write Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I saw the red beneath the clay The rot and root the bed of store The drain of prime and given time Then the rain washed that away" and lunch is nice with you too Sir Sy |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Superbly touching! Rae |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper Thank you for the read and comment. Lady, And the rain washes lunch away. LOL Rae, Thank you so much. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy.... you smile me with your words.. very nice! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RDB, Then a smile is my pay for the day. |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Fantastic Sy...I see your muse is alive and well with this one! Bea Grandma Bea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bea, Bless you my friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how this rolled off the tongue! wonderful write! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Have a good sleep and a good tomorow. |
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