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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
 Insignificant your words have become What I thought to be from the heart a fabrication of your imagination your mastery of words so convincing hard to tell they were a ploy to lure me into a place of no return A place my healed heart was looking for The place were true love exists I sit here reading these words Tears of sadness flow from my eyes At the apparent sincerity of your notes I still feel the warmth of what I though so real So foolish to think that true love exists Believing every single phrase The promise of this incredible love Mysteriously! My heart is not broken For I have loved you as I wanted to I hold no regrets Nor would I have done different There is a mystery in us that though we should have parted ways many times over We hold on to each other tighter each time I am left wondering that maybe true love exists Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Just so, dear Jeannette! It does exist. To dwell in certainty could be boring to some extent, don't you think? This is a very fine poem and I also love the picture. Love, Margherita  |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
My dear Margherita, Yes I agree.... it would be boring! *smile* Thank you for your words.. Jen Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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toughlady New Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 2Florida, USA |
I must agree with you both, to be so certain would rob us of the chance to explore every avenue in the hopes of finding it. If we knew we might limit the roads we take to only those where the outcome is known. We would miss so much. I think you know this already : grin : |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A VERY interesting ‘write’ [effectively emotive ‘Realism’...with much ‘food for careful thought’!] One tiny point: shouldn’t it be ‘apparent sincerity’ in line # 11? Applause! |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
Ah yes...it should be ... Apparent not appeared... it will be changed... Thank you.. Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow. wow. wow. obviously you are very happy! I am sooooooooo glad that you are happy now. A diamond is a diamond, though get dirty all the time. Trust your eyes, dear lady. many hugs!!!! wish you have a very good night and enjoy a wonderful family time. peom? as beautiful as always. |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
Drauntz~~ Ah ...you are so kind as always!! I am happy today.... as I am when I write... and when I share... This community of poets brings me much joy. Thank you for your wonderful wish...  Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
... For she has learned enough and lived enough to know that talk is cheap, that almost any one can learn to buy the gifts and say the words. Yet she bears the deep, abiding love that half the world would kill for, if it could. |
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