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A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

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Open Poetry #40
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SilentShadow
Junior Member
since 2006-04-20
Posts 32
Fl. U.S.A.
0 posted 2007-05-04 09:20 PM

I want to go where the music is slow,
And the lights are low,
While they're playing your favorite song,

We'll swing and sway,
While the juke box plays,
And I'll hold you all night long.
© Copyright 2007 Daniel A. Ryan - All Rights Reserved
Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07
Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA
1 posted 2007-05-04 09:32 PM

SilentShadow,

This moves along very well with good end rhymes.

Bobby  
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-04 09:42 PM

very romantic and everyone's dream.

very sweet.
enjoyed
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