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TC
Junior Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 15
Scotland

0 posted 2007-05-02 03:38 PM


You told me I was
always at my
best in the
dead of
night.
Words
that were
profound
with musical
accompaniment
made us weep.

Oh how you tested me
with questions on
sincerity, until
with relief,
dawn broke,
and we slept off
the intensity of our
sexual reasurance.

© Copyright 2007 Jim Murphy - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-05-02 03:46 PM


Greetings, TC, from EA! Welcome aboard the pip ship!

I had to grin at your closing lines. That is definitely a pleasurable way of proving one's sincerity! lol

"Words
that were
profound
with musical
accompaniment
made us weep."

~ "Profound", indeed! ~ and very poetic.

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Earth Angel

TC
Junior Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 15
Scotland
2 posted 2007-05-03 06:21 PM


Hi Earth Angel,

Thank you for the hug, and a hug for you too.

Regards
Jim

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