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poet--- by unpoemed one |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
He Snores along the wind And snuggles within his dream He drinks the bright sunlight And dines on quartered moon He breathes rainbow colors And wears the morning dew His hairs lift Milky Way And bears lengths Comet Hale Head in hat of ocean And feet in shoes of mountain He reads light of stars And writes the bubbles of stream Here is your tax return. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I especially like the 'images' of a poet as one who: "....snuggles within his dream" AND: "....drinks the bright sunlight And dines on quartered moon ....breathes rainbow colors And wears the morning dew" |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
such a beautifully descriptive write, though that last line caught me by surprise. |
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dwgpoet Member
since 2007-03-05
Posts 122FL, USA |
My kind of style poem, Multiplicity of images. Your first commentator, secondhanddreampoet summed it up for sure. Is this poem, about poets??? copyright dwgpoet 2007 |
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