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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
last night I tried to tell you my fears But all I got was your needs I tried to express that I was afraid of something you said But it was reversed to make it my fault All that I wanted was your comfort your warmth Yet I landed in a bed full of thorns! Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I understand this one~~ nice write M |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
life. How true. Man needs to be homeschooled. felt the frustration. We have to put the wish on tomoorow. the lady in red is very beautiful picture. |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
M~ thank you I guess we all face moments such as this one.. Drauntz~ Thank you for seeing what I felt/feel ... And yes all we could do is hope for a better tomorrow. Lady in red~ thank you for the compliment Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
did you not understand? most men like to be mothered. women's needs miss that luxury. understanding, martyjo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I was going to highlight the entire poem, as my favorite line...and then decided to simply express the saddness in this....remembering a time when I was here...God bless you and keep you....wishing that he takes time to listen. Hugs to you |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
'generalizations' can be rather sadly dangerous and ultimately hurtful.... to both the maker and makee!.... |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
I tried to tell you my fears but all I got was your needs Fantastic! Really enjoyed this one |
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L. Ottanio Junior Member
since 2007-04-17
Posts 27Connecticut, USA |
I won't be rude or hypocrital to say that men have no feelings... because just as many women have no thought to how their mate feels... being too wrapped up in themselves... i guess what i mean to say - is it goes both ways. peace lynn |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
Lynn~ I totally agree with the what you have said... Most men tend to lack the ability to be sensitive to womem. Where I have seen women destroy extremely sensitive men... ironic how that works! It goes both ways. Some relationships have a mutual understanding of selflessness toward each other and some do not have that balance...  Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ouch!!! Oh do I ever know this!!! Always my fault no matter what. |
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