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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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Chester, England

0 posted 2007-04-21 03:33 AM




Go to Hell

At long last Ivor’s gone to Hell,
buried exactly where he fell.
They  didn't need to dig the hole
Old Nick rose up to claim his soul.

For evil had to have revenge
for Ivor‘d spoiled Old Nicks best friend
by teaching him that doing good
was much more fun than spilling blood.

But now down there I've heard some that tell
Nick wants to throw him out of Hell.
He’s losing souls now every day
as Demons now join Ivor‘s play.

So now most souls have fun in Hell
and even pure evil is doing quite well.
while Ivor‘s enjoys the Devils defeat
by having a fire to warm up his feet.

So if you pause by the grave of this dearly departed,
just think of the fun you may join that he started.
Try to be good, but if you can't, then oh well,
you'll be welcomed and toasted if you go to Hell

Ivor G Davies

The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2007-04-21 07:12 AM


*giggles*


Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-04-21 10:52 AM


Sounds to me like you brought a bit o' heaven with you! Hades ain't like it used to be! ~ May all sinners rejoice! lol

Enjoyed the read, dear fallen angel! lol


Linda


Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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3 posted 2007-04-21 11:55 AM


Oh! good, have fun.......time is up.

enjoyed.

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