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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Among These afternoon Rays of light Two goldfish Together from beneath Deep green lily pads slowly gyre It is a quiet dance A waltz perhaps To a music Only they can hear Occasionally a fin Breaks the surface of the mirror Creating a circle Under low willow leaves That expands Growing farther out From the moment That was theirs alone Until for all others It disappears . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
John, you are a Saint of poem. tooo much for a poem to hold. excellent. **************** light is from the soul fish are the feelings gyre is the mind dance is the heart fin is the emotion this moment is the dream. still one can never be too careful to your trap. the charm will stir many a heart. background....???? chilled even when I mention it. |
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