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lil' Angel
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since 2003-11-14
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0 posted 2007-04-17 07:16 PM



No one but you
Has ever been able
To touch that special
Place within my heart
No one but you
Has ever come close
To reaching that spot
No one but you
Could look into
My eyes and
See my soul
No one but you
Could hold me
The way you did
And make me feel
So much alive
And give me so
Much happiness
No one but you
Has ever looked
Past the exterior
That I hate
And just saw me
The real me
No one will ever
Take your place
Even if you don’t
See how much I
Still love you
No one will be
Able to fill that hole
That is now in my heart
No one will ever be able
To love me as you did
No one will ever
Love you as much
As I do
No one but you
Will hold the
Place in my heart
That you hold
Now and forever

Lil' Angel


"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord."  Proverbs 21:30



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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-17 07:23 PM


oh. what a beautiful love poem. I am soooo happy for you.

very sweet!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-04-19 09:54 PM


Enjoyed...James
Jenna
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since 2007-03-20
Posts 180

3 posted 2007-04-20 08:58 AM


A very sweet poem, I liked the flow of this as well
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