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ivordavies
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0 posted 2007-04-16 12:15 PM



Body and Soul

As I was walking down a road,
Engrossed in thought that day.
I never even heard the car,
That took my life away.

It ran my body over,
While I just stood and stared.
To die today I hadn’t planned,
And I was not prepared.

I looked about, for I had heard,
A tunnel should appear,
For me to walk into the light,
Now free from all my fear.

But I wasn’t any different,
I did not grow my wings.
Horns didn’t spring out from my head,
I checked for all these things.

So what was I supposed to do,
I couldn’t just stand there?
So I went to see my body,
Was it broke beyond repair?

It was then I saw the silver cord,
A shiny slender thread.
It joined my solar plexus,
To the ‘me’ that lay there dead.

Then I thought I saw ‘me’ moving.
In that instant things went black.
And I found myself now lying,
At the roadside on my back.

It’s been some time, and now I’m well,
A memory of the past,
But I’ll not forget the moment,
That I thought had been my last.

Though torn out from my body,
I remained myself, and whole.
In that moment I discovered,
My life-force was in my soul.

My death taught me a lesson,
As only ‘dying’ does.
But I wonder where I’d be today,
Had that car been a bus!

Ivor G Davies



The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-04-16 12:44 PM


worried ...then laughed.

hope everything is fine with you now.

Thank God that it was not a bus.

enjoyed your beautiful writing.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
2 posted 2007-04-16 07:17 AM



Thank God, it's not a bus.

You have a wonderful gift of writing such smooth flowing lines.

Thank you for sharing this.

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2007-04-16 09:52 AM


ivordavies
Intrigued by your humor, good write.

ivordavies
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4 posted 2007-04-21 10:00 AM


Dauntz,

Actually the only thing that ever hit me was a bus!

Ivor


ivordavies
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5 posted 2007-04-21 10:03 AM


MyEnchanted_Melody

Thank you for sharing this with me...

Ivor

ivordavies
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6 posted 2007-04-21 10:04 AM


Seymour,

Sorry abot my sense of humour, even I am intrigued by it!

Ivor

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