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Sunshine
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0 posted 2007-04-15 09:35 PM



The Dream Challenge

These Dreams
Wild with danger
Did I imagine thus?
Or was it some reality?
Oh, God, what if I spoke in my own tongue?
Did I even realize truth?
Will I become but naught?
Will I survive
These Dreams?

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

© Copyright 2007 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-04-15 10:41 PM


the real fascinating charactor of dream, which entice people to talk about, to interpret as early as ? .

enjoyed.

The Lady
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2 posted 2007-04-15 10:49 PM




"Oh, God, what if I spoke in my own tongue?"

oh, this question Karilea

I love this

Andrew Sewell
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3 posted 2007-04-16 11:49 AM


Another enjoyable read, thank you for sharing.

Andrew

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4 posted 2007-04-16 12:19 PM


Challenge met and surpassed MommaK!
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5 posted 2007-04-16 12:45 PM


Sissie

Love the questions...maybe dreams are meant to birth them?  

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6 posted 2007-04-16 02:13 PM



"Wild with danger"

Another fine dream rictameterwrite.

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7 posted 2007-04-16 07:09 PM


I especially love the image
of Dreams...wild with danger!

much applause!

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8 posted 2007-04-21 08:23 PM


I adore the wonder in this!   Dream on, Miss Sunshine!  There are more Yellow Brick Roads yet to build.  

hugs,

misce'

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9 posted 2007-04-21 09:02 PM


Very well done, Karilea!
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10 posted 2007-04-22 12:31 PM


BRAVO!!...Very well done...*Big Hugs*
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11 posted 2007-04-22 01:52 PM


lately I dream more
and have these same questions

thanks for the ponder

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