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Snow Blossom
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Snow Blossom |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Snow Blossom Crystal clear, drizzles lazily Easter tear Still, bloomers in renegade reappear Sleepy murmurs of lily chide crocus Snow-blind springs unto sheer hocus-pocus Bunny hop for the imprint on greenery fine Tippy-toe as the floral sighs scenery line Native gifts left in grace prosper gratitude Lest the white knuckle dust but an interlude Melt Thaw away, summoned hold earth’s parley Shed of shell to be velvet, fine arms reaching to seek An announcement gold leaf, among fauna so meek Still, bloomers in renegade, sensing of time Crystal clear, falls a tear, flowers Easter by rhyme Copyright Kkh 4/8/07 |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A wonderful call for Spring to banish all signs of winter's chill...Well done...*Big Hugs* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
descriptive and I loved the part about bunny hop for the imprint |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ You always intrigue and please with your poetic ink spills~ No exceptions here~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: That alone is enough to recognize the Poet's talent! Wonderful! Love, margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Melt Thaw away, summoned hold earth’s parley" lovely spring song TD |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Had me visualizing my kids during their very young childhood days.  Nice write. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
As a lover of spring, I quite enjoyed this. Needed it, even. Very lovely stuff, thank you. "Hey, it's me, I'm dynamite and I don't know why" -- Van Morrison, 'Sweet Thing' |
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peppis New Member
since 2007-03-27
Posts 7Oregon |
Excellent, expressive, a great read. Thank you. |
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