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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2007-04-08 10:25 PM


Pretty Little Words

What's this that I fear, whisper in my ear
Pretty little words, quaint like humming birds
Tell me that you love me, that we'll always be
Because I'm still afraid, that our love may fade
Through and through we've been, I'd do it again
I'm a fool you see, when you look at me

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

© Copyright 2007 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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1 posted 2007-04-08 11:12 PM


I see no fool in these heartfelt words...Well done....*Big Hugs*
Juju
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2 posted 2007-04-08 11:24 PM


looking at it I may have to flip some of the lines lol

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-04-09 07:10 AM


I love it the way it is
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2007-04-09 08:11 AM


Hi, juju! Long time no read!

"I'm a fool you see, when you look at me"

~ Aw, yes! I know the feeling ~ and those butterflies in the pit of the stomach can be so addictive! C'est l'amour! That's love! No guarantees but one heck of a ride! ~ so to speak! lol

Love to live ~ and live to love!
EA

Kethry
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5 posted 2007-04-09 09:57 AM


That's the way of it in both love and hate. Well written piece.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

Juju
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6 posted 2007-04-09 01:21 PM


Thank you every one.  I should have the video up for this on wednesday night.

-juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2007-04-09 03:06 PM


Your heart speaks of its desire for eternal love, we can all relate I think.

Do not fear, TRUST!

Beautifully put.

Love,
Margherita

Jenna
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8 posted 2007-04-10 08:41 AM


A gorgeous write, gets straight to the point.
LeeJ
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9 posted 2007-04-10 09:34 AM


well done juju...very descriptive...yet sensual...without seeminly doing so...very much enjoyed
Juju
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10 posted 2007-04-12 11:24 AM


Thankyou every one!!!  Below is the link to see the video of this.  
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9JZpfAjZ7r8

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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