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The Watering Mind
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The Watering Mind |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The Watering Mind Spirit glide, a positive slide Sinking softly into notions A sacrifice, not poverty of emotions Smooth the hands that massage hard fate Gentleness, strong powers innate Simple and kind, the watering mind Never placid when satisfied Contentment is the ease of will Sculpted by a trusting heart made still When love supports the barefoot path Where I venture in my dreams A pool of wonder, thunder deems Undressed by the moon The sparkle of uncharted waters Drizzled in the plunge of lace it garters Moved in the noble night, all is right In love, much more in love Play-scapes made of our desire Crystal waters rimmed in fire Cling in molten harmonies Create and build two destinies Come closer Where I venture in my dreams Fidelity from which love streams Copyright Kkh 4/11/07 |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Play-scapes made of our desire Crystal waters rimmed in fire Cling in molten harmonies Create and build two destinies Come closer Where I venture in my dreams Fidelity from which love streams"  Reads like Shakespeare, maybe even better. Great write TD. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
loved the rhythm and rhyme in this, beautiful flow, lovely words! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Another outstanding piece of poetry! Reading you reminds me of my linguistic limitations. Those words dance for you ... better yet WITH YOU. Love, Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Play-scapes made of our desire Crystal waters rimmed in fire Cling in molten harmonies Create and build two destinies Come closer" Stunning! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
TD: Enjoying your watering mind dream. It's pleasant to read over and over. Hypnotic! K |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Love the rhythm and surreal images in this. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Undressed by the moon The sparkle of uncharted waters Drizzled in the plunge of lace it garters Moved in the noble night, all is right In love, much more in love" you do it so well TD |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wow...this is really wonderful and very well expressed. Thank you |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow....very lyrical and flowing. Beautiful! Eric |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Water poems... a lily pad's delight! Thank you, Kathleen! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
WHy I missed a beautiful poems. "Where I venture in my dreams A pool of wonder, thunder deems" this is the summary of my poem "wonder" today. How interesting. oh.... |
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