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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-04-06 08:38 AM


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You see my friend
I don’t think I can
Fill an hour
With those moments
That mattered to me

It seems
My personal history
Has been spent
In lonely dwelling on
A simple glance or two

The focused gaze
That in its eyes
Had too much for me to analyze
And yet changed the world I knew

Here come our wives
With their entourage
So let’s meet them then
With our best persiflage
And no comment on it all  


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Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-06 10:38 AM


Steven is sold.
he doesn't care about himself
he dosen't care about his surroundings.
he doesn't care about other humans
he doesn't care about his wife.

Or A cat named Steven meowed out to you?
or you may tell the story.

enjoyed as always.  

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