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Jenna
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0 posted 2007-04-06 04:43 AM


Its in my mind but it wont express itself in words, I try to voice it but it doesnt make sense.
It sounds foreign and muddled, no meaning or structure.
no verse or rhyme.


Its like an illness that wont subside,
keeping me up all night and troubling me all day. The pain is ever lasting,
creating a blackness in my heart which can never be filled.


Its like a war inside my head,taking no prisioners, causing devastation and destruction.
No way of finding an escape route.


I try to voice these words but they sound so wrong. They fall to the ground with force,
crushing our hopes and dreams and shattering everything we used to have.
They hurt us with their sharp impact,
like fire blowing up between us, we're engulfed in the devastation that they've caused.


My words just fell like heavy rain,
crashing to the ground with speed they came falling and nothing could stop them.
Now all thats left is the thunderstorm which is crashing down around us, washing away my words but leaving its impact on our hearts forever.

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1 posted 2007-04-06 09:45 AM


this is so sad...it's amazing how words can have such an impact...
Jenna
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2 posted 2007-04-06 01:46 PM


Thankyou xxx
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