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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2007-01-07 12:23 PM

Will there be another moment with you
Will there be another smile filled with longing
Will there be another look from your wicked eyes
Will there be another word spoken in whispers
Will there be another caress gentle and knowing
Will there be another laugh that reaches my soul
Will there be another you that captures my heart

I hope so as I think you do me good..

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2007-01-07 01:17 AM

And, I hope so too.
Loved this poem.
Hugs,
Ethel

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2007-01-07 02:02 AM

"another you"

words that captured my heart Roniece
I hope so too

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

3 posted 2007-01-07 11:43 AM

now then
I will be in wollongong on?
lol
arthur

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2007-01-07 11:50 AM

Nicely done RDB, and its amazing how we always want another, even if its just one more moment. Nicely done.

Devious Intellectual
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 112

5 posted 2007-01-07 12:24 PM

i like the wicked eyes line the most, its like they are wicked after a break up cuz they are so perfect and you hate you dont get to see them, love this prob cuz i can relate

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

6 posted 2007-01-07 01:01 PM

   Wonderful sentiment... well written, RDB. I hope so... for without hope there are no dreams... and without dreams life would be less than just a parody of itself.

   Write on.... dream on... and write on.

             MoonShadow
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2007-01-07 01:06 PM

Most wonderful sentiments here!
Well done!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2007-01-07 04:46 PM

such lovely comments to my work, I thank each of you very much... RDB

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2007-01-08 11:49 AM

So many questions, so litle time

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

10 posted 2007-01-08 05:24 PM

My My My..Dont we all wish for more moments that will do us good. Nicely done..~Bill

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2007-02-03 06:42 PM

Was there...James

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

12 posted 2007-02-03 07:00 PM

I wonder the same things, myself.

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

13 posted 2007-02-04 02:39 AM

well if you do, be sure to write about it!!! I want to hear more about his wicked eyes....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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