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A Love Poem
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A Love Poem |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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A Love Poem nine months I carried you I carry you with me still this world is a sweet place all because you are in it I am proud of who you are and of whom you are becoming blessed beyond any words because you choose to love me to me you are precious boys though grown to become men earning my respect and admiration as the beating of my heart echoes you remember this my sons… in any lesson I have taught you love and forgiveness are the greatest gifts forgiveness has a great power it heals your heart and frees you love much and honestly deep enough to truly feel it love without reason for it will give you the best rewards and is worth all risk I love you Mom |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful poem mom  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady A delight to read.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSweetOneSlickLady~ There is such beauty in this ... Mom's are like that ... yeah, we are~  I LOVE THIS !!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
nodding, a love so deep it aches...'cause it just keeps growing and growing.  Mine are my light too. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: and this gift of words will make their hearts rejoice. Deeply touching and of great value on more than one point of view. Love, Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
awwww Helen my son left yesterday to go home to Florida sweet water tears for me here... "this world is a sweet place all because you are in it" |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow. it is beautiful. I shall write the same thing to my children too. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwww....I Love this!  |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Such a great write, for our boys Brian and Michael Slicker. They our such great boys that we have made in wonderful young men. the love that was put into this write will be in their hearts forever. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
As a mom , I can feel what you are saying. You have said it well. Thank you |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
I have read over your poem so many times and I am in tears as it is so incredibly moving. Absolutely beautiful. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Incredibly lovely! *S* |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
what a beautiful write for your children. Love shines thru on this one. |
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