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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Processing In the vortex of chaos theme I found an Isle of partial dream Where echoes ever sail and bounce Those reinforce and can denounce I sifted through the mires grind To lift the things that I could find And make of them a castles wall To stay a life of timely call My mortar, possibility Of all that chaos has to be A mixture of those elements That suits a life’s development And from this waters magic sooth I found a moment’s magic truth And drank of it like honeyed wine It was an anchor for my line It is a fragile port of call And know it cannot suit us all |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
possibility speaks loudly Sir Sy and so do you...  and it's nice to be here first! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"I sifted through the mires grind To lift the things that I could find And make of them a castles wall To stay a life of timely call" what do you find? a kind heart with strong beat? a clean soul untainted by chaos? an agile mind as young as a child? a booming curiosity? the gift of art? and love? "And drank of it like honeyed wine It was an anchor for my line" What is in the drink? friendship, care and love from others? Can the chaos be sifted out from life? sleep may do the job if we do not dream bad. always enjoyed your writing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Thank you for being first.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz The drink is an aphrodisiac. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing "Damn" is good. LOL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this is like a designed career by God himself... excellent prose enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've beaten back a few waves myself. And while I built that wall, it did occur to me that the very thing that brought my provisions, also took them away, sometimes more to my advantage, other tides made it less, but ever a challenge... So the purpose must be in the "doing", yes? Oh tell me I got it right!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Are we not Gods unto ourselves? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, You got it right, I agree. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am a firm believer in possibilities m'friend....never ending and endless... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Good reply, thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"And from this waters magic sooth I found a moment’s magic truth And drank of it like honeyed wine It was an anchor for my line" ~ May all your truths in life be like honeyed wine!  Sip long and heartily! Happy springy hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel And if I may I'll send some hugs and s back to you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I have never stopped enjoying the beat of your songs you write for us... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus May I ever write them and may you always enjoy them. LOL |
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