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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-04-03 01:49 PM


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all night rain falls
on a very small town

rings form
on water in ditches
beside the curbs
becoming passing metaphors
before and as they go

a dull gray light
from lamps above the street
the dismal wind on leafless trees

like the sadness
of latter day relationships

neither really wants the other
if only because that’s all there is


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-03 02:41 PM


low mood.
but it is joy of the old roof of steel who finaly gets a chance to talk, an overnight talk.
enjoyed as always.

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