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passing shadows
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0 posted 2007-03-31 11:42 AM



Stuck Inside

February appeared like a whimsical affair
and disappeared like a cheap cigarette
I'd abandoned the upstairs window where
I sent all those things I chose to forget.

March's overhang gives an edge to the rain
where I stand with the tips of my toes
I'd surmise near death if not for the pain
indeed it's life, and that's the way it goes.

I come to face sadness and restless years
in the low spots that fill up and reflect
my hesitations, awaiting till April appears
might then I be able to recollect.

Is it possible to be so vacant in mind
that heart takes priority with gnawing ache
though sometimes the pondering succeeds to bind
the fear and pain that only numb could make.

So I stand with no relation
on the edge of tribulation
wanting more but not knowing
how to get to wherever I'm going

with feet such as mine, made of lead,
I turn and go back inside instead.


© Copyright 2007 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-03-31 01:25 PM


so very beautiful. truly.
Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2007-03-31 03:03 PM


Another beautiful piece of introspection, dear Dixie.

Poetically powerful too!

From deep within the answers will crystallize and manifest.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

The Lady
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3 posted 2007-04-02 11:01 PM




"February appeared like a whimsical affair
and disappeared like a cheap cigarette
I'd abandoned the upstairs window where
I sent all those things I chose to forget.

Dang Dixie! This is amazing work. Grabbed me right here and never let go!


poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
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4 posted 2007-04-03 04:41 AM


I almost feel like I have been there, or the journey has just begun. Then perhaps poetry should always feel that way.

Christopher

a poet who cares

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2007-04-03 10:04 AM


I know this feeling Dixie...well worded.
Hugs to you, Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2007-04-03 10:54 AM


thanks all

this was just an oldie that felt right to post again for the change of March into April

glad you enjoyed

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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7 posted 2007-04-03 07:20 PM


It's safer warmer and cozier inside trust me!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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