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Whatever Will Be |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Whatever Will Be I suppose there comes a point in life where you don't analyze things anymore you don't shuffle thoughts or try to answer all the questions like you did before. You don't attempt to reason why or get on track so you can say "I may be onto something here", growing decision trees that go one way. You no longer create hypotheses or state that you have a mission you don't talk about tomorrow or justify yesterday by wishin'. Life doesn't become easier at all it's difficult whether you're bound or free- trees don't always grow up to the sky and you won't always find out why... but nothing's strange when you finally see to believe in whatever will be. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
I felt a strong strength in this poem. yes, the strength of standing up and preparing to soar. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When the past and the future don't interfere, you can enjoy the moment of Now. Yes believe in whatever will be, in its intrinsical value. Significant words, very efficiently rendered feelings. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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luvvbuzz Junior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 24 |
this is a great poem, one from somebody who has learnt to accept lifes changes and twists, someone who perhaps now realises that they have all the experience and emotional tools to deal with whatever comes their way. it has a comfortable factor about it and i liked that alot.  |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Im still wait for that time, meanwhile back to the books. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I like yuour way of thinking Dixie gal. Well done!  For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I'm trying to get there as well, take care, JulieAnn ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
‘Life’ eventually ‘gets away from’ us all !...... I especially liked: “I suppose there comes a point in life where you don't analyze things anymore you don't shuffle thoughts or try to answer all the questions like you did before.” and: “You no longer create hypotheses or state that you have a mission you don't talk about tomorrow or justify yesterday by wishin'.’ much applause ....for this thoughtful/philosophic ‘write’! |
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unholyjudgement Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 116Wherever my soul takes me next |
We all ride on such a path through life My mind is like lightning |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Reminds me of the old Doris Day song below ,I guess remembering that is showing my age Que Sera, Sera, Whatever will be, will be The future's not ours, to see Que Sera, Sera What will be, will be. Hope |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
actually Hope S said exactly what I wanted to say (same song, same era, universal truth) but I like the old saying that says we should learn to have the courage to change the things we can, the grace to accept the things we cannot, and the wisdom to know the difference (regarding change, of course) excellent write, enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
In the 5 plus years I have known you, I have seen a lot of growth and maturity... and wisdom! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...I suppose we only have control over our own choices...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! thanks for all these wonderful comments I'm honored |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I too have watched you grow Dixie and been truly amazed I have yet to find the point where I don't try to answer the questions it just becomes a more peaceful search and the answers are much more clear keep on keeping on dear friend |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I am always impressed with your ability to at once display strength and vulnerabilty and express it in a tender language. Eric |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
there does come a time when you just live, and you captured that, beautifully. |
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