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Whispers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: Whispers The wind whispers in my ear To try the bars of mortals fear To look upon the battle field And see the scares for what they yield Walk among the ghosts of them And place a garland on mayhem Air the tears and let them fall Spill the waste of duties call Search the inner lies of bright The dark and the Vail of night Gaze upon their bail and files Then look again at crosses miles Stir the acid of power or Never ever will it flower? Let fly the spirit of the range Give honor to the things that change But never ever spare the dare Or back away the life you share |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"But never ever spare the dare Or back away the life you share" I'll remember this. It is heavy. enjoyed the poem. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Air the tears and let them fall .... Let fly the spirit of the range Give honor to the things that change Dear Seymour, did your ears ring? I just told my husband and my son what a beautiful artist we have here on Pip. This is no exception, you are wise and your words are weaved masterfully. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz ENJOYED YOUR COMMENT, THANK YOU. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita I'll thank you twice, one thanks is not enough. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Top o' the mornin' to ya, Mr. T.! "The wind whispers in my ear" ~ and you whisper ever so softly and wisely, in ours!  May the wind blow gently at your back ~ and in your ear! Springy hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I particularly loved the very beginning and the ending!: “The wind whispers in my ear To try the bars of mortals fear...” “But never ever spare the dare Or back away the life you share” certainly well worth ‘re-posting’ !! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Thank you lovie. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Enjoyed your comment, thank you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"The wind whispers in my ear To try the bars of mortals fear" May the winds whisper the secrets we must discover which will enable us to end fighting...forever. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy very profound write. Well done!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Repost is quite fine with me...thank you sir Sy.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun I'm with you on that one. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you, thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus Thank you my friend. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"But never ever spare the dare Or back away the life you share" life is for living Sir Sy good advice... |
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