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Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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Denmark

0 posted 2007-01-13 02:09 AM



If we look back we see time that has gone
Sometimes two or one on one
We are fighting our fight
To live and be our selves right

There is problems to overcome
Things we needed to do but not have done
But still we see
Passions, smiles, and we were feeling free

We have lived our life we think
But hey give it a wink
We have never lived before the day tomorrow has gone
If that means sometimes two or one on one

We then still have the chance to give
So think of it and Live
Fight with thoughts of learning from the past
Your life will then for ever last

Untill the day tommorrow has gone
Sometimes two or one on one

Smile and best wishes

Jes / Dreamer

© Copyright 2007 Jes Didrichsen - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2007-01-13 02:14 AM


Jes, it's so good to see you writing again

you've been missed

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
2 posted 2007-01-13 02:22 AM


Thanks Passing

Yeah i still can write but i dont have so much time for it anymore, but today the kids are still sleeping, and had a few minutes to go here and read abit poetry, and your poems made me write that poem - smile.

I cant say i will come much but i will look in now and then.

Smile

jes

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-01-13 03:20 AM


well done Jes, enjoyed your words   RDB
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