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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2007-03-26 06:24 AM



All that I am
you are

There is a glass jar
filled with fireflies
sitting on the porch
with dusk hitting the wood
like breath over birthday candles
I feel my feet brushing over grass
am I running
or flying

All that I am
you are

Fingers brushing against
cold skin
on afternoons that don't end
the sun melting on the pavement
with oil stain rainbows
bleeding through
I can only hold so much air
in my lungs
until my smoke rises through me
flames

All that I am

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XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
1 posted 2007-03-26 07:22 AM


::smiles::   me like
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2007-03-26 07:28 AM


incredible! it's good to read you again
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2007-03-27 07:53 AM


I am so enjoying watching the way that your writing is growing....your wings are carrying you far m'friend...nicely done.  
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