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Open Poetry #40
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ozlem
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since 2006-10-06
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0 posted 2007-03-23 05:33 PM


It feels like lonely in a huge crowd
Everything around is flowing, such a whirl
Kind of drifted in an endless time frame
Sometimes end up lost in a moment
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Startime55
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1 posted 2007-03-23 07:24 PM

This poem makes me think of daydreaming when in a crowd of strangers who don't understand feelings of the soul...I like how I saw these words...you have did a great job putting them together...*Big Hugs*
passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-03-24 07:37 AM

I know that feeling
ozlem
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3 posted 2007-03-24 04:30 PM

Thanks for your comments

I was thinking of big city while writing
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