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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2007-03-22 02:53 PM



Going back 20 years in my mind
Trying to put my life on rewind
Still wondering of the signs that I missed
Still wishing you and I had a least kissed
Watching myself now,
Through the bottom of the crystal ball
Looking for the moment when I saw you fall
Weaving through the memories in my dreams
Nothing there....as in reality
Is ever...what it seems
Finding the corner where I made the wrong turn
Remembering rumors of a place called fairburn
Wondering, if I could do it all over again
Would I find you there???
Wondering where I have been????

Maybe I could try...really hard
And then all would be in it's place
And I could touch your face...
at last....



~~~kingsangel~~~

[This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (03-22-2007 04:26 PM).]

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2007-03-22 04:43 PM


yeah, I do that sometimes too

well written

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
2 posted 2007-03-22 05:09 PM


Enjoyed the read!  Sadly, we can't go back but we can always go forward if we want to.


Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
3 posted 2007-03-22 05:22 PM


Thank you both, sometimes we can go back though, in our minds, and change they way we feel about something, sort of bringing us back around....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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